Nicole was an 8 year old girl with long brown hair and freckles and she lived in Auckland and she played netball. Her favourite colour was purple and her eyes were blue.
Once upon a time, Nicole and her family went shopping in Dubai. She was in the lead going to a shop. She looked back. Her family was not there.They were in another shop.
She started to run through all the shops. She was running faster and faster. She was so scared, that, in her mind, she was screaming. When she was running, she saw a bad guy so she ran faster. She was running through all the shops.
Phew! She got a glimpse of her family and she smiled.
Good Writing Molly, it is a very exciting story and I was quite scared for Nicole. Well done. Mrs. Schimanski.
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